The Official Writing Challenge
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08/20/09
Nice to a positive entry about winter. Well written.
08/20/09
Interesting and inspiring, with a hopeful ending. Good piece!
08/24/09
A really good meaningful piece - the wonderful hope Christ gives us, even in our weakest darkest times. The story catches the mood of the winter feel very well. Thanks!
08/24/09
Good write from an interesting POV. Maybe, could use a little more conflict and it "bounced" around a little. Do you know what I mean? Just needed a little tightening up to flow smoother from thought to thought.
I enjoyed it.
Mona