The Official Writing Challenge
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You captured this wintry scene while pulling me into the room to observe the happenings. I enjoyed this and could easily picture your MC and the night unfolding because your writing was wonderfully descriptive.
What an awesome story--the plot, the atmosphere, the character, the descriptions all combine in a lovely entity.
Beautifully nuanced wintry emotions and wintry years. Delightfully fresh descriptions - I loved '... hissed with mock-dragon zeal.' You had me imagining beyond the text to Kevin, in the garage, picking up the first things that came to hand. Turning the card table into a freaky work of art - what can I say, this has to be my favourite so far. yeggy

The strongest adjective I can use to describe this story is that it is INTERESTING. That's a big one. Readers love interesting stories. The excellent writing and the characterization with great descriptions offers the reader alot to grab hold of.
Fascinating story and the wonderful "senior" confusing between Dana and the storm well done.