The Official Writing Challenge
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08/20/09
You captured this wintry scene while pulling me into the room to observe the happenings. I enjoyed this and could easily picture your MC and the night unfolding because your writing was wonderfully descriptive.
What an awesome story--the plot, the atmosphere, the character, the descriptions all combine in a lovely entity.
08/21/09
Beautifully nuanced wintry emotions and wintry years. Delightfully fresh descriptions - I loved '... hissed with mock-dragon zeal.' You had me imagining beyond the text to Kevin, in the garage, picking up the first things that came to hand. Turning the card table into a freaky work of art - what can I say, this has to be my favourite so far. yeggy

08/23/09
The strongest adjective I can use to describe this story is that it is INTERESTING. That's a big one. Readers love interesting stories. The excellent writing and the characterization with great descriptions offers the reader alot to grab hold of.
Mona
08/23/09
Fascinating story and the wonderful "senior" confusing between Dana and the storm well done.