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The beginning of this has a cozy feel. You could expand this more to explain more about your courtship and why you're approaching things as you are. In a sex-saturated world, it'd be a good piece for many to read.
Your title is perfect and I really like the theme and the way you told this. Just put a space between paragraphs and do a little spell checking too - I think you meant "waist" instead of "waste" - though MS Word's spell check won't necessarily catch that.
This winter, eh?!?!?!

A unique and very lovely way of teaching a lesson about appropriate boundaries - well done!