The Official Writing Challenge
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Great story of love rekindled. Well done!
08/20/09
Aww, so tender.

I liked the line about kleenax's looking like little snowdrifts.Great visual!

I like how you showed each characters thoughts- presenting both sides of the story.

Very clever about the snow cave picnic area. and so much more.... good story!
08/23/09
Very good writing. The imagery took me right inside that cabin and the woods. An authentic story about life as is really is.
Love your title for this. I'm a bit of a sucker for happy-ending real life romantic marriage stories and you did a wonderful job with this one.
08/27/09
Yay for you!! Great job and congratulations!! We need to celebrate!
08/27/09
Good job and well-written. I like how their thoghts were so similer and that they searched for answers.
Just read your story; so glad I did. What a delightful, romantic tale. I could see this turning into a book with Marcy having a baby at long last. Goob job!