The Official Writing Challenge
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08/07/09
Very good and true to life from a teen's perspective.
I always seem to keep stuff to myself before bursting out with it.
Well written and interesting.
08/10/09
How astute of you to realize how very hard it is to "cut the apron strings." It is something I wrestle with quite often myself. Thanks for a well written story.
08/11/09
Good story, I love how you incorporated the title towards the end. Very touching. The flow was I little choppy and interrupted for me, but I'm sure that was just the spacing from cut and pasting the entry. Good job!