The Official Writing Challenge
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08/15/05
Very cute story. Hmmm, I wonder, which home schooling mother could have written this one? If in fact it is a true story.(:
08/18/05
I love your playful piece! I not only was pulle dalong through the story with eagerness and excitement,but when I got to the end, I could relate to the poor over worked mother!! God bless you!
Delightful and entertaining, but with a purpose! Great job! I'd say submit this one to a homeshooling curriculum. :-)
08/19/05
Cute :)
08/20/05
What a great article for homeschoolers! Being one myself, I wish my days would have good endings like this one! Even though I suspected some kind of teaching atmosphere, I really thought the setting was out on a mountain, but then the descriptions sounded a lot like a honeybee colony. Great job!
08/21/05
Very fun and creative entry! Enjoyed it!
08/21/05
This was so nicely put together. I really enjoyed the entire story. God bless ya, littlelight