The Official Writing Challenge
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08/06/09
How funny...I thought Billy was a kid...how funny that he is a grown-up (who still has some of his childhood fears intact). Cute story.
08/06/09
Funny piece.
This was a very enjoyable piece. I like the twist at the end of him not being a kid but a chicken adult!!
08/11/09
Cute! Tho I'm confused why his mother made the appt and not his wife? Mamma's boy maybe? Poor Mrs. Waters. lol.
08/12/09
My brother who is an adult is just like this. He can pass out at the sight of a needle. I loved the idea of the sleep mask. Fun entry.
Mona
08/12/09
ROFL!!! Poor Billy! Or is it poor Mrs. Waters? I loved the twist on this at the end, you had me laughing once I figured it out. What a hilarious take on the topic. I also liked the detail of the grape lollipops. Great job! This was a fun read-and play on words!
08/12/09
Nice title. Great writing. heh heh