The Official Writing Challenge
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I like your reminder in verse that "grown-up faith" must be our own and comes from putting away childish things.
08/08/09
I liked it!! Very nice and put together well.
08/11/09
Very nice, good flow. There is a lot of truth in your words. Good job!
08/11/09
The "I let another" lines are so powerful. Showing peer pressure in its hold. This is a lovely poem with a strong message and so much truth. Worth savoring.
Mona
08/11/09
Wonderful job. This was easy to read and spoke to my heart.
08/11/09
Made me ponder myself and wonder just how much do I let others "think" for me?
Good job with deep ideas hidden below the surface words.
~Cathy~
08/11/09
How beautiful! Nicely done, in fact, painstakingly done! Kudos, my friend!
08/11/09
Lots of truth (the kind that hurts) in this poem.
08/12/09
Some very thought-provoking lines and verses in this piece. Thank you for sharing.
09/29/09
This poem is excellent in every way, from the rhyme, to the meter, to the message. I enjoyed reading it. Thank you, by the way for the very kind words about my poem.
Lisa