The Official Writing Challenge
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08/06/09
I liked the use of repetition in this piece. Good work.
08/13/09
Congratulations on your second place win. I liked the way you used your MC's conversations with God to show his struggle, and the Father's reassurance that all will be well if we trust and obey.
Lisa
I really like the ultimate lesson of this piece: God is the answer to everything. The honest and earnest questions were something we all can identify with and the answers something we all need to hear. Congratulations on your EC win. Well deserved!
08/13/09
Congratulations on your EC ranking as well. Keep up the good writing.
Lisa
08/13/09
Absolutely beautiful and touching story. Great work!
Wow! Wonderfully insightful and I love the repeated "Comes a whisper". Congratulations!
08/14/09
Congratulations on your second place win. I found the story a bit confusing at first, but liked the ending...Keep writing, and God bless!...Helen