The Official Writing Challenge
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08/06/09
Excellent. Timeless. A good story for many generations to share.
08/06/09
A beautiful story. I liked the subtle contrasts between the generations.
08/08/09
I particularly like how you showed through this story how true adulthood is related to making and keeping commitments.
08/12/09
Lovely story. I thoroughly enjoyed reading your entry.
08/13/09
A timeless message and the last line could not be more perfect. Congratulations on your EC.
08/13/09
Congratulations on your story receiving highly commended and EC status. I liked it the first time I read it, and am not surprised that you have placed so well in the rankings.
Lisa
08/13/09
What a wonderful story! Beautifully written and you did such a great job of bringing the whole family to life. Excellent and inspiring! Congrats Pat on your Highly Commended placing at the Master's level! Great job!!
08/14/09
Highly commended! Congratulations. You put the story over well, including all the generations, showing the difference between how things WERE then and how they ARE at the present...Helen