The Official Writing Challenge
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Excellent. Timeless. A good story for many generations to share.
A beautiful story. I liked the subtle contrasts between the generations.
I particularly like how you showed through this story how true adulthood is related to making and keeping commitments.
Lovely story. I thoroughly enjoyed reading your entry.
A timeless message and the last line could not be more perfect. Congratulations on your EC.
Congratulations on your story receiving highly commended and EC status. I liked it the first time I read it, and am not surprised that you have placed so well in the rankings.
What a wonderful story! Beautifully written and you did such a great job of bringing the whole family to life. Excellent and inspiring! Congrats Pat on your Highly Commended placing at the Master's level! Great job!!
Highly commended! Congratulations. You put the story over well, including all the generations, showing the difference between how things WERE then and how they ARE at the present...Helen