The Official Writing Challenge
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I really enjoyed your writing. It's always interesting to think about what those who witnessed such events would think and feel. Thanks for sharing it.
Interesting take on this weeks topic. I really enjoyed it. Loved your title, too. God bless you.
Very interesting to have someone tell this story as a spectator of the scene. It makes the whole thing come alive.
What a wonderful diary Mrs.Z.kept! It is like being there. Well written . Kept my attention.
Hearing it from Mrs Zebedee's point of view made this familiar story feel very fresh again. I wondered if she'd still be cross about Jesus not promising her sons a place at his right and left hand when he returns in glory. I wasn't too disappointed though - it was an excellent read.