The Official Writing Challenge
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I liked the MC's voice in this piece.
Oh, I liked this. The MC's struggle with issues of life came thru' loud and clear. Good ending!
Funny and fun. I just saw one Wee Little Error: "Silence prefailed" I believe should be prevailed.

I enjoyed reading this.

May God bless and keep you writing.

Dan Blankenship
Thinking that I recognize the humorist behind this one, let me say that I expected no less!
Just so much fun. And fresh.
Your story speaks to me in a familiar kind of way. Yea, I too write and delete when what I've written sounds kind of dumb or inappropriate. I like this story for its humor and its realism too. Good job!
Thanks for stopping by to view my entry; and "yes" I made a couple typo's, embarrassing - and I need to Edit more carefully...but you guys were kind anyway; thanks, your words keep me writing - and I do love eto write! (*.*)
Well, Marilyn, you are not squandering your adulthood. You listened to WLV and you are writing--your calling...This was funny, informative and "on the topic" at last!!! Just joking. I thought your little side trips were refreshing...Keep writing...God's blessings...(and thanks for your comment on my "Green Pasture" article.)...Helen