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This is an interesting story about a piece of the world I've actually avoided - physically (I'm not a traveler, even a little bit), and as a geology student! I think it would help the reader if your paragraphs were spaced. Also, it seemed there was some confusion about the verb tense that kept my mind from settling down, Otherwise, an interesting documentary.
08/19/05
Very well told, great descriptions (space the paragraphs for an easier read)
08/21/05
This was a very interesting documentary--sure did enjoy reading it. I agree though, about the paragraph spacing making it easier to read. God bless ya, littlelight
An "On Top of the World" documentary. I thoroughly enjoyed it. I was able to see through your words what the ice cap is like. Thanks very much for sharing.