The Official Writing Challenge
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Date
08/07/09
Ryan raised his hand high:
"Mature often complain,
After toasting champagne,
They’re attacked by migraines."

I loved that part. Very good and fun poem. Well done.

May God bless and keep you writing always.

Sincerely,
Dan Blankenship
08/13/09
Very nicely done from childrens' viewpoints.