The Official Writing Challenge
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07/30/09
Hilarious! I love Mari's 'aha' moment. :) Love it!
07/30/09
Well, Tennyson had been a young man at some point in his life, after all. Good story.
Good title for this clever story. Looks like Tennyson was right after all.
07/30/09
And women continue to compete with sports til their dying day...
Oh, excuse me. Got carried away.
Very nice story of spring love.
Mona
08/02/09
I LOVE LOVE this line: you need to take yourself down there so you can snag yourself a testosterone-laden, baseball-playing, spring-loving young man."

Oh...and I liked the MC's name. ;)
08/03/09
I liked the idea of dating being prohibited for the first two terms. Made for some excellent tension as spring fever gripped the campus.
08/03/09
You write so effortlessly! How do you do it? And the title is so perfect that you should place high on that alone! Great job! Kudos!
08/04/09
Great title. I love the inclusion of Tennyson in this piece. Fun! Clever, too. :)

Nicely done.
totally cheesy and predictable or not, I loved this story. Well written, so smooth and effortless. Well done.
Very well written..it seems effortless. A very enjoyable entry. Well done!