The Official Writing Challenge
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07/30/09
I love kites, too. Very good story. I like how you ended it. It's awesome when the older boys help out the younger.
07/30/09
Reading this was like watching a video of a little boy and his first kite. Good writing.
08/04/09
Aww...I felt the disappointment when the kite got away...glad you wrote it back in with Chet!
08/05/09
The story reminds me of the phrase, "Boy and kite in windy weather, tying earth and sky together." That's a message for both the young and old.
08/05/09
Kites and boys;new friendships, sun and breezes and even rain...you have captured Spring! It was an enjoyable read. Thank you...
08/05/09
Ahhh, a kite story! I was hoping for one of those this week! Glad I found it. I loved that Bobby had Chet step in and help him to show him a few things about kites. That was very well done! I loved it!