The Official Writing Challenge
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07/30/09
I love kites, too. Very good story. I like how you ended it. It's awesome when the older boys help out the younger.
Reading this was like watching a video of a little boy and his first kite. Good writing.
08/04/09
Aww...I felt the disappointment when the kite got away...glad you wrote it back in with Chet!
The story reminds me of the phrase, "Boy and kite in windy weather, tying earth and sky together." That's a message for both the young and old.
08/05/09
Kites and boys;new friendships, sun and breezes and even rain...you have captured Spring! It was an enjoyable read. Thank you...
08/05/09
Ahhh, a kite story! I was hoping for one of those this week! Glad I found it. I loved that Bobby had Chet step in and help him to show him a few things about kites. That was very well done! I loved it!