The Official Writing Challenge
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I really like this entry. It has a great message, and tells a great story too. Well done!
07/30/09
Great story with a super lesson.
I liked the lesson in your story--wondered what would have happened if Jordan hadn't played well.
08/03/09
awww...you hit this ball too close to home...it made me cry
Good story. I'm glad the dad realized the time and connection he was missing before it was too late.
Thanks for reminding me to stay tuned into the needs of my children...they grow upa ll too quickly. Nicely written. Well done!
Wow, Laury. You made me cry.
This was awesome!