The Official Writing Challenge
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08/01/09
I thought this was really well written and has a nice flow to it. I've heard ice crack in the spring and it's an eerie sound. Good job!
08/03/09
Wonderful descriptions here! I haven't been around a large body of water when it thaws, but it always amazes me how quickly the water can warm and begin to flow in the spring.
Creative. I could see and feel this.
08/03/09
This is something new for me, too. Awesome descriptions of the ice thawing out. Very good job.
Such a descriptive look at the "Northern Thaw". I could picture the break-up in your choices of poetic words. Well done!
08/05/09
How descriptive! I was with you through the entire imagery of your poem. Excellent!
You did a great job personifying the various segments of breaking ice. Your word choices were excellent--culminating in a very creative poem.