The Official Writing Challenge
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08/03/09
Ha Ha! Love this. Love the ending, especially.
This is fun...love it!
08/03/09
Loved it, especially the "golden locks."
Oh I liked this! I was tapping my fingers on my desk as I was reading it and found it such a delightful and fun read! Great job!!!
This is wonderful, Bryan. I agree, it would make a great kids' picture book. Very clever last two lines. Well done!!
08/04/09
Very fun and cute. Love the jaunty rhyme. And golden locks??? Oh man...Clever! I wish I would have written that! :)
08/05/09
Now that was clever!
08/05/09
heehee, cute and clever! love the wordplay at the end.
Clever and fun and the last line had a tongue-in-cheek- wittiness about it. And, once reading it, the title could not be more perfect.
Creative and fun with the best line saved for last!
Delightful! Made me chuckle at the end... :)
08/05/09
Bryan, how do you think this stuff up? It is so good. I laughed out loud and had to read it to Bill.
Mona