The Official Writing Challenge
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This story's descriptions made it outstanding. The mother's explanation was just right for the ending.
07/30/09
Great story—I'm in awe.
07/30/09
I love the descriptions of the car and the girl and her father's relationship and then the girl and her mother's. Awesome story.
08/01/09
Loved this, especially the ending. What a great story of hope!
08/03/09
Rich descriptive language