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Nice rhyme and rhythm, this flows easily, making for a light read.
Many meaningful phrases here.

You gave me some wonderful pictures in my head through your words.

Wonderful choice of words with womb of crocuses, daffodils etc. And I like the "Boasting with swagger, talking with sass" :)

Why would you say this was simple and weak? I thought it was awesome. I love your descriptions. Very good job! Just because you don't have many comments doesn't mean it's weak. So glad you left a hint so I could read this wonderful poem.
I enjoyed the softness of the poem, espcially the 5th and last stanza.
Vivid descriptions especially in the last stanza where winter loses its hold and spring overcomes!
Wonderful poetic look at Spring. I especially liked the phrase: "To offer us hope, they yield to His nod..." Nicely done!
This poem got better with each verse. The last three were the most creative. I enjoyed your right-on-topic poem.