The Official Writing Challenge
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07/31/09
Nice rhyme and rhythm, this flows easily, making for a light read.
08/03/09
Many meaningful phrases here.

You gave me some wonderful pictures in my head through your words.

Wonderful choice of words with womb of crocuses, daffodils etc. And I like the "Boasting with swagger, talking with sass" :)

08/03/09
Why would you say this was simple and weak? I thought it was awesome. I love your descriptions. Very good job! Just because you don't have many comments doesn't mean it's weak. So glad you left a hint so I could read this wonderful poem.
I enjoyed the softness of the poem, espcially the 5th and last stanza.
08/04/09
Vivid descriptions especially in the last stanza where winter loses its hold and spring overcomes!
Wonderful poetic look at Spring. I especially liked the phrase: "To offer us hope, they yield to His nod..." Nicely done!
This poem got better with each verse. The last three were the most creative. I enjoyed your right-on-topic poem.