The Official Writing Challenge
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07/31/09
Aww! That meanie grinch-wish there was a sequel to see when things would be happier and kids could have fun again. That was so not fair! LOL. Good story and characters-I felt sorry for the missing bike and beach chair though.
The Title pulled me in, then when I began to read...I felt the frustration of a mom with good kids who want to be outdoors and healthy instead of couch potatos. My favorite line..."like Godiva Chocolate...."; could definitely relate here. Forward this on to your local newspaper. Great job.
08/03/09
Is this a true story? If so, how sad. It is a fun read. Good job.