The Official Writing Challenge
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08/16/05
So true that we often don't capture the moments at our 'doorstep'. A gently provoking read.
Makes me wonder about the Real "sights" of this life, and if I even see them? Or been part of them in the eyes of other "sighseers?" This might be easier to read if paragraphs were spaced. Good thoughts with a challenging punch.
08/19/05
Very good observation of characters. I would double space, too between paragraphs.
08/19/05
Well told (space the paragraphs for an easier read)
08/21/05
I think when you said, that you laid the flower by the cross and sincerely kneeled in prayer--that would send a picture out to the world about Jesus. I really liked your story.
God bless ya, littlelight
08/22/05
So often we miss things that are closest to us. You have brought this out in a most interesting way and I like the end where the tourists are clicking - taking a picture of you kneeling at the foot of the cross.