The Official Writing Challenge
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07/31/09
Ahh, good thoughts and a good message, but a tad short for me, lol. I was hoping for a bit more and maybe just a few more details on these two girls. Were they sisters? Best friends? Twins? Thanks for sharing!
08/30/09
'... met by seas of delicate blooming flowers...' - some lovely phrases in this piece - good work :-)