The Official Writing Challenge
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07/31/09
I love this glimpse, it's well done and the detail of focusing on the flower for Ellen was lovely. I'm glad that she had some hope in the year coming in spite of all her sorrows. Lovely piece!
08/01/09
Loved this message of hope. Spring seems to be God's gift to the hurt and grieving. Good job!
08/06/09
I had not read this entry until today. It is very, very good. Such a wonderful message written with words that pull on heartstrings. Very worthy, indeed.
Mona
08/06/09
Excellent writing and vivid details in this piece. Congrats on your placement.