The Official Writing Challenge
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07/30/09
Sweet story of love and comitment. Well written.
07/31/09
I love historical pieces and you did a very nice job on this one. I'm glad Carl kept his promise.
08/01/09
Wagons Ho and way to go Carl. (I was pretty sure he was going to blow it). I enjoyed this a lot.
08/03/09
An enjoyable story of the earlier days. Pa corresponding with the MC's beau without her knowledge "jangled" a little. How could she not have known, as important an event as mail was to a household in those days? Just a minor question. It could certainly have happened just as you wrote it.
08/04/09
Sweet story with a happy ending!
08/05/09
Awwww!! Such a cute and darling story, becuase the characters just fit together so nicely! I wouldn't mind a sequel, to see what would happen to them afterwards. This is very nicely done, I liked it!
08/05/09
Historical romance, well paced and the way you presented the characters made their emotions seem real and causes the reader to care about their outcome.
08/05/09
I like how you began with tears of sadness and ended with tears of joy. Most of all I liked the sweet story of a simpler time.
08/05/09
I know how hard it is to work a tale into 750 words and get something worthy. You did it! Your pacing of the story is very good. Interesting.
Mona
08/06/09
Congratulations on your placement, Pam. Really enjoyed this tale.
08/06/09
Excellent work. As a fan of historical fiction, I enjoyed reading this and wanted more of the story. Congrats.
08/06/09
Well done, Pam! Congratulations on your placement. :) Wonderful characterizations - their emotions were felt. Good job.