The Official Writing Challenge
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07/31/09
Very creative title to describe how spring can begin. I like it-blooms exploding. That's a whole brand-new one to me, but it made your last verse really pop.
07/31/09
I don't get the associate with the resurrection and spring, but it is a nice piece overall.
08/03/09
Took me till about mid-poem to realize "who" was doing the hating of spring...I liked how the last two stanzas picked up speed...they kind'a exploded!
08/03/09
Hallelujah to rebirth!!! Amen! Uniquely written.
Oooo, very different poem. I like it! The lines that went with "Causing ice thaws into puddles" threw me because the grammar isn't quite right, but otherwise the rhythm caught me and carried me along.
Great poetic feel and nice rhythm along the way. Creative take. Nicely done!