The Official Writing Challenge
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LOVED THE VISUAL, "felt the PRESENCE of the LORD like a cloak!" Mmmmmmmm Good!
This is good; your jumping from past to present tense in almost every sentence make it a bit hard to read though.
I like that she found the presence of God to be the answer. So often we seek specific responses to circumstantial needs rather than HIM. A good lesson, here.
Cast all our cares upon Him. Good visuals.
Another strong entry this week. Very well constructed. Igot a little confused on some of the tenses, but the strength of the story came through. Well done!
A very relatable story. Try to keep your verb tense consistant :) Other than that, very nice.