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07/23/09
So much sadness and grief at a young age. Glad there was hope and comfort at the end of the story. Good writing.
07/27/09
You shared your heart beautifully here--made the reader truly see turbulent 13. It brought to mind hurts I had as a young girl that healed over nicely, but still left a scar.
07/27/09
Yes indeed, some teens have to grow up much faster than others, but then God needs them. Thanks for pointing out how special they are. God bless.
07/29/09
You've captured the despair of the teen's heart with gentleness. Very thoughtful writing.
07/30/09
I don't know if this is a true story or not, but it reads like it could be. It's a lot for a teen to bear. Thanks for sharing you heart. Nicely done.