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07/23/09
So much sadness and grief at a young age. Glad there was hope and comfort at the end of the story. Good writing.
You shared your heart beautifully here--made the reader truly see turbulent 13. It brought to mind hurts I had as a young girl that healed over nicely, but still left a scar.
07/27/09
Yes indeed, some teens have to grow up much faster than others, but then God needs them. Thanks for pointing out how special they are. God bless.
You've captured the despair of the teen's heart with gentleness. Very thoughtful writing.
I don't know if this is a true story or not, but it reads like it could be. It's a lot for a teen to bear. Thanks for sharing you heart. Nicely done.