The Official Writing Challenge
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07/23/09
Sweet story, literally and figuratively. I could feel the characters' emotions throughout.
07/27/09
You did a great job with the emotions here. I loved your girls. You told a beautiful story of friendship.
07/27/09
Wow, you gave us such strong hints about the personalities and back stories of these girls, in such subtle ways. Would love to know more, but enjoyed this glimpse I got.
07/27/09
Wow! What a great piece of writing. Super characcterization, dialogue and plot execution. I got lil confused in the middle, but read it again and figured it out. Great friends story. God bless.
07/28/09
Great story of friendship and great writing. Very well done!
07/29/09
This made me want to call my best friend from high school! The emotion shone through, and in a believable way. Seriously, oranges and cinnamon sugar? I gotta try that.
07/29/09
Love how gentle this story is and the example of how precious true friendships are. Special.
Mona
07/30/09
The dialogue is so real - so true to the feelings we have as teens. A perfect wrap up at the end as well. Excellently done.
07/30/09
Okay, you made me sniffle. I could really relate to this as we moved when I was 17 and fresh out of high school.
I loooovvve your writing. You have not only the heart of a writer, but your skills are spot on.
07/30/09
The characters, the scene, the dialogue were rich and believable. Thanks for a great story.
07/30/09
Woo Hoo, Sara!
07/30/09
great job Sara.. CONGRATS!
07/30/09
Good job!
07/30/09
Sara, I think this is possibly the best thing you ever written. You nailed the topic, and you sucked me into the hearts of these two bff's. Congrats on your HC - well deserved. :)