The Official Writing Challenge
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08/09/05
I really enjoyed this. Good job.
Nicely done commentary on Jesus' final retreat. Very moving.
08/10/05
The ultimate retreat! Thanks for sharing.
08/10/05
Insightful, well done.
08/11/05
We should all have more retreats like this one with our Father. Nicely done. :)
08/11/05
Too often we speak the one more word without having been in the presence of God - we are porrer for it and so are the people we long to touch. Very moving!
08/11/05
A very lovely look into the Savior's heart.
08/11/05
I really liked this a lot! Very powerful descriptions.
08/11/05
Wow! So much said with so few words. Simply beautiful.
Blessings, Lynda
I felt the suspension of time as He stayed the 'one more'. Simply beautiful.
08/12/05
Your piece was a work of art ... literally. Absolutely beautiful.
08/12/05
What a beautiful snapshot of the special relationship between Father and Son, and, through extension, us. Beautiful word pictures. Made me stop to savor each paragraph!
08/12/05
Excellent. Sumbit this somewhere as a devotional-will you??:)
08/13/05
Powerful, well written. Most excellent! I would only say to watch your adverb use... they detract. Well done!