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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 3 – Advanced)
Topic: Retreat (as in quiet time away) (08/01/05)

TITLE: One More
By Pat Guy
08/08/05


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Solitude. Its silence soothed every fiber of His being. Secluded among old, gnarly olive trees, He stood with His face uplifted toward the skies. Listening closely, Creation sang its own song. He closed His eyes, breathing deeply and evenly, filling each breath with scented breezes of fruit, blossoms and earth. Streams of light filtered through tall branches warming His cool skin in uneven patches.

He was exhausted …… in spirit, mind and body. Dropping to His knees, His Father quickly embraced Him, to sustain Him, to love Him. Before a word was spoken – before tears could fall – His Father was there.

In an instant, The Holy Spirit tended to His sorrows; lifting, filling and empowering, as angels hovered in attendance longing for the slightest command to whisk Him away from the leprous rags of mankind.

He didn’t move. He didn’t speak.

He received – His Father’s Love, received – His Father’s Strength, received – His Father’s Peace. Only this made it possible to walk one more step, to speak one more Word, to touch one more disease.

He will carry with Him this Holy restoration, for He knew what was ahead, and He will come back to this Mount of Olives soon … so very soon – with others.

But for right now, He will stay in this moment … just a little while longer …… with His Father.


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J. C. Lamont08/09/05
I really enjoyed this. Good job.
Beth Muehlhausen08/09/05
Nicely done commentary on Jesus' final retreat. Very moving.
Debra Brand08/10/05
The ultimate retreat! Thanks for sharing.
Brad Paulson08/10/05
Insightful, well done.
Joanne Malley08/11/05
We should all have more retreats like this one with our Father. Nicely done. :)
Melanie Kerr 08/11/05
Too often we speak the one more word without having been in the presence of God - we are porrer for it and so are the people we long to touch. Very moving!
Jan Ackerson 08/11/05
A very lovely look into the Savior's heart.
Shari Armstrong 08/11/05
I really liked this a lot! Very powerful descriptions.
Lynda Lee Schab 08/11/05
Wow! So much said with so few words. Simply beautiful.
Blessings, Lynda
Linda Watson Owen08/11/05
I felt the suspension of time as He stayed the 'one more'. Simply beautiful.
Suzanne R08/12/05
Your piece was a work of art ... literally. Absolutely beautiful.
Sandra Petersen 08/12/05
What a beautiful snapshot of the special relationship between Father and Son, and, through extension, us. Beautiful word pictures. Made me stop to savor each paragraph!
Sally Hanan08/12/05
Excellent. Sumbit this somewhere as a devotional-will you??:)
Maxx .08/13/05
Powerful, well written. Most excellent! I would only say to watch your adverb use... they detract. Well done!


   
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