The Official Writing Challenge
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Took me a minute to get the last line, and then realization came with a punch. Great twist.
I loved your twist in the story.Too bad the mc had two little boys to take care of.
07/27/09
Very thought-provoking; for you have skilfully injected a sense of hope, courage and role-reversal against the malice and immaturity that broods without needing to be spelled out.
07/27/09
Great ending. It's a sad fact some kids have to live through that. Gives a lot to pray about. God bless.
07/29/09
Wow - the tension was rising all the way through and then you hit me with the ending. Zap! Nice one - great fast paced dialogue as well.
07/29/09
So incredibly sad. I really wished that it didn't have to end like that, but you did it so well. I loved the ending best of all.
07/29/09
Sharon deserves so much better. Upsetting story. Surely, mimicing many across the land...but sad.
Mona
07/29/09
Sharon deserves so much better. Upsetting story. Surely, mimicing many across the land...but sad.
Mona
07/29/09
Sharon deserves so much better. Upsetting story. Surely, mimicing many across the land...but sad.
Mona