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I love how you shift the focus from self to others in this piece. I, too, have been asked what I would change if I had a chance. I like how you showed that, in reality, we probably wouldn't change anything. Your question is a much better question to answer - and I think you are right on with the answer that you give. Thank you for submitting this great entry!
You packed a lot of things to ponder in this piece. Great message at the end.
Super entry that I could see in a parenting devotional book. Well done!
I like a well written devotional. You gave me a lot to think about. Way kool. God bless.
I'll bet you could find a magazine to republish this. Great job! I'm so thankful my parents were able to do this with me.
You wrote on one of my main concerns for not only our teens, but for modern day Christians: religion vs. a personal relationship with Christ. When it comes to working with my 17-year-old going on 25, we're on the same page. Thanks for the great piece and share it far and wide!
Bravo. I'm nodding strongly here at my computer. This was spot on and yet packed full of emotion - not preachy, just sincere. May I say that your children are blessed to have a wise mother such as yourself.