The Official Writing Challenge
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Hehe, cute poem, and so true!
You presented the different stages of a boy growing up well. I liked best the lament at the end.
07/27/09
Excellent. Very nicely done. And you brought froth a wonderful tribute as well. I'm impressed. God bless.
It's so good to see that such a missive can be delivered in single-syllabic words, easy to understand while still delivering quite a punch of reality. I tried saying this in a monosyllabic form, but failed miserably, showing just how difficult a task writing your poem must have been. Wonderfully done.
07/27/09
I'm impressed! You took a clever concept and used it to illustrate a profound truth about young people as they grow up. Very well done!
07/27/09
This was amazing! What a great excercise (and mind puzzle) to come up with all of this in one-syllable words. I can't imagine trying it! Loved everything about it.