The Official Writing Challenge
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You kept my interest throughout. Great dialogue. I was dissapointed to not find out why he smelled like alcohal, though.
07/23/09
I liked the narrator's voice in this piece. I agree with the above comment about the unaswered question. Overall, an entertaining story.
07/28/09
Well written, but not sure I understand the punch line.