The Official Writing Challenge
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I liked the way you were able to build the tension felt by Atol in his understanding of the decision he was about to make. Proud, apprehensive, inquisitive and with just enough of the inner prompting to reach the right choice to find the creator who does indeed love his creations.
07/23/09
I liked Atol. He was a free-thinker. I really liked this story. Very creative. Excellently written.
07/23/09
Interesting story. Creative and engaging. Now I want to read more about this character's life.
Combining sci fi and adolescence--now that takes talent, but you did it very well. Your mc is a very engaging character.
07/27/09
Yes, this wasn't just written, but well planned out and executed. Great job. Very impressed. God bless.
07/27/09
Oh, I loved this! It reminded me a bit of "Ender's Game," if you've read that. Of course, that may just be because that's one of very few sci-fi type books I've read. But I still really liked it.
07/29/09
Nicely done! Good twist. I liked the ending-the last line was really, really good! Excellent stuff! I enjoyed the read! ^_^