The Official Writing Challenge
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07/23/09
Ouch. Had a feeling this would have a sad note to it. Poor Ginger. Some good emotions trapped in here. Good stuff.
I love your characterizations. I could see the sisters and the dad so clearly. I felt real sympathy for your mc. She had too heavy a load for her young shoulders. Excellent writing.
07/27/09
Sadly, so accurate a portrayal that's too common, but the simple prayer at the end brings us to another level. Thank you
Wonderful writing my friend. Well done!
08/01/09
It is very good writing that has the reader visualizing the scene as it is being read. This is what I was doing. I think you did a very good job with your MC and the other characters in the story. They were very believable.
Thank you by the way for your kind words about my entry.
Lisa