The Official Writing Challenge
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07/23/09
This was a nice piece of history. I liked the contrasts between the two girls. Nice job.
07/23/09
Interesting story of two contrasting girls. I liked the parallels you drew in this piece.
07/26/09
I too liked the parallels you drew. I enjoyed the way she was exploring life and all its possibilities. I felt it ended a bit abruptly. I wasn't sure how the modern Agnes WANTED the tale to continue. But perhaps she wasn't sure either?
Excellent in comparison and contrast with a strong voice. Well done.
I like the way you tie in a bit of history in a realistic way. I did find the ending to be not quite satisfying, but otherwise good job.
07/29/09
Love the slivers of culture in this place, it was simply beautiful. I enjoyed the read-thanks for sharing.