The Official Writing Challenge
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07/23/09
ROFL!!! Hoo boy, this was hilarious. Poor Mindy, but at least Mom knew what would fit her right and work best...just ignore the sizes on the labels..it's just a number, right? LOL! I loved Ted's reply if you could really do that, hilarious, laugh out loud kind of snort. ^_^ Great stuff!
07/23/09
Great humor,wit, and timing. super dialogue as well. Not a topic I would have written on :), but, it was so freshly written and smart I enjoyed it. Great job. God bless.
07/23/09
Funny. You handled the topic with humor and tactfulness.
I loved the humor in this piece, and my favorite line was where the mc was carrying the offensive garment like David swung his sling shot.
07/25/09
Delicious and yummy. You presented both sides of the situation with understanding and finesse! Great fun!
07/26/09
I took a while to get into this, but boy did it warm up once they got home? Hilarious family interactions. Loved it!
08/03/09
I can honestly say I never had that conversation with my mom, lol. I can see the whole scene, though. Very well done!