The Official Writing Challenge
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Hooray - the best decision ever! Excellent writing.
Written with such intense emotion! I offer intense applause! Bravo!
A prayer closet! What a great idea! You brought all the elements together very well here. This one bears the smell of printer's ink to me!
Very nicely done! Great sequence leading to a powerful finale. The prayer closet is definitely the best place to take a retreat!! :-)
Truthful message written well.
Very very strong writing. Really captured the hurt. My only complaint is one single word ..... "plus". It lessened that paragraph. But that's it. The rest is a homerun.
Well done - could feel the hurt and anquish.