The Official Writing Challenge
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08/08/05
Hooray - the best decision ever! Excellent writing.
Written with such intense emotion! I offer intense applause! Bravo!
A prayer closet! What a great idea! You brought all the elements together very well here. This one bears the smell of printer's ink to me!
Very nicely done! Great sequence leading to a powerful finale. The prayer closet is definitely the best place to take a retreat!! :-)
08/10/05
Truthful message written well.
08/13/05
Very very strong writing. Really captured the hurt. My only complaint is one single word ..... "plus". It lessened that paragraph. But that's it. The rest is a homerun.
08/13/05
Well done - could feel the hurt and anquish.