The Official Writing Challenge
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07/23/09
I really liked this poem. Mary crossed my mind when I saw the topic. You presented it beautifully. Loved the title, too.
07/27/09
Concrete,concise,and cleverly written in the original form of language.
07/30/09
Nicely done. Not sure if Joseph was a teen, but pretty sure Mary was.
09/03/09
I really like this poem. I like the way you presented Mary and Joseph as adolescents with a choice...whose choice to obey did in fact change the world.