The Official Writing Challenge
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07/23/09
Very creative and clever. A great message, too.
07/25/09
Clever piece. As one who has a sole survivor in a car crash, I can relate. We should do more to teach our teenagers to heed wisdom that is learned by much pain and suffering.
07/27/09
A very creatively written piece about something that has also been troubling me. There have been so many teen accidents in our state over the past couple of years.
07/29/09
Creative and quite clever. Very nice bit of writing. Well done!
07/29/09
A very sober message, cleverly presented. Thanks for sharing this!
07/29/09
Well cell phones can do just about anything in the hands of these teens...
Interesting POV.
Mona
07/29/09
Wow. Powerful stuff. What a sad ending, carries quite a punch.
07/29/09
Very creative and clever. A very sobering piece. Well done.
07/30/09
Sorry, I was more than half way thru before I realized it wasn't a girl that was trapped somewhere but a thinking cell phone. I'm not terribly fond of poems that take that long to clue you in to what is happening or inanimated objects having thoughts.