The Official Writing Challenge
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07/23/09
great devotional piece.
07/23/09
What a great story! I can picture my sons arguing like your characters. I was also a youth worker for many years. I like spiritual applications you weave through the story, too.
You've expressed some terrific insight here. Just watch some of your word usage. It would have added a word but "amusingly" could be replaced with "with amusement."
07/29/09
Eww! Don't call it devotional. That automatically nixes from competition :)