The Official Writing Challenge
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07/16/09
I could never, ever write like this. I believe this is a winner!
07/21/09
I loved the presonification of summer and the idea that we play with her. I was confused at the end when you changed genders. Is "he" fall? Also, the different rhythm of each verse interrupted the flow and took me away from the joy of playing with summer.