The Official Writing Challenge
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07/18/09
Love the touches of culture in here and I'm glad that he was able to have a good thing happen for him. Your title fits this piece well. The ending is good!
07/21/09
I was a little confused in the first few paragraphs. The mood seemed to shift between hopelessness and hope. But after that it was clear and you used the MC's musings well to tell the story.