The Official Writing Challenge
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08/08/05
I love it! As a mother of four little ones, I relate. Maybe I can try that apron trick?:)
08/09/05
I could feel the insanity in your vivid descriptions - and remembered my own days when our 4 kids were little and I had no time. A very real (honest) piece, with a good conclusion - God is in the midst of it all!!!
08/10/05
I have definitely been there. God is always there waiting for you - He knows and understands. Believe me, there will be more time for quiet when the little ones grow up a bit.
08/10/05
Very true to topic. Good job!
08/13/05
Very well constructed. Good pacing. Nice closing. All in all good!
08/14/05
Another one that I can relate to :) Nicely written.
08/15/05
I'm always amazed to see someone write so well without using much dialogue. That's a talent you definitely possess. Congratulations on another well deserved victory!
08/15/05
Great job Lois! Good to see you back in the winners circle. I think everything you write qualifies! :)