The Official Writing Challenge
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07/17/09
I love this story. Little Ethan is a character. :) He did end up having a most perfect summer. Good job!
07/18/09
An enjoyable story. I only wish more children these days had adventures like this (instead of hours glued in front of video games).
07/19/09
Two enjoyable stories in one, yours and Ethan's.

I remember those summer vacation essays. Mine were never as eloquent as Master Ehtan's, but thank you for stirring those memories to life once more.

Sweet, sweet writing.
07/22/09
I always hated those after the holiday essays too. Like your character I never went anywhere. I liked his story - apart from the rabbit skinning.
07/22/09
This was fun to read. Bravo to Mrs. Simmons for encouraging Ethan to discover what made his summer so special!
07/22/09
Why do teacher make kids write those essays? I used to feel just like Ethan. Great job with this story!
07/22/09
LOL @ Ethan! The squishably loveable kind of MC. nicely done, had me chuckling through the end! Your title is right, it is a perfect end.