The Official Writing Challenge
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This was an interesting read! Very creative touch and way to make the characters come alive in this piece. I liked it. Thanks for sharing it-what a tribute to be delivered!
A fun retelling that was faithful to the spirit of the original. Clyde, my emotions didn't really engage in reading through your version. I couldn't really picture Ehud or get a feel for the emotions involved in the deception. The joking at the beginning worked well up until Ehud arrived. I hope this is helpful as I appreciate you have had very few comments this week. Bless you. Gregory