The Official Writing Challenge
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07/17/09
I enjoyed the walk around the lake, and the various lessons you drew out of it along the way.
07/18/09
Beautiful descriptions with truth subtly woven throughout.
07/19/09
If your goal was take us on a stroll through a loving place, you have succeeded.

Although some might say this was a bit overloaded with descriptives, in this piece it works by turning your words in photographs.

I have the urge to read it again, simply to enjoy that stroll once more.