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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 3 – Advanced)
Topic: Summer (the season) (07/09/09)

TITLE: A Bug Filled Christian Life
By Rachel Rudd
07/15/09


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Creak Creak. Bzzz. Bzzz. Creak Creak. Bzzz Creak Creak. Pling. Pling.

Sure is hot out here, hot enough to fry an egg and the sun went down a half hour ago. Sweat is dripping down my back and I’m about glued to this swing.

Creak Creak. Bzzz. Bzzz. Pling Pling.

Sarah Sue went on to bed because she thought she could beat the heat. I bet it’s just as hot in there as it out here. Don’t make a hill of beans difference whether you sit on the porch or lay on the bed. It’s just plain hot.

Creak Creak. Bzzz. Pling.

Hot air ain’t normally good for thinking, but tonight I think I’m just in the mood. I don’t philosophize very often, but sometimes I can sit and think for hours. Tonight is just one of those nights.

Creak. Creak.

I put up a new porch light last week and then hung up the bug zapper so the bugs would stay away from it. They didn’t get the message, though. Those insects love light. I don’t know why, but they just do.

Bzzz. Pling.

I remember the preacher talking about light. It was a couple of Sundays ago. He said that Jesus is the light of the world and when he’s in us, he lights us up. I ain’t sure what all that means, but I sure do know what light is and how much I need it.

See, a couple of years ago we ran out of money right in the middle of summer. Had to live without power for a whole month! It sure was dark after the sun went down. Ain’t no fun neither. That darkness sort of eats at your soul. We was about to go plum crazy until I got my paycheck and got some light again. Sarah Sue said she never wants to do that again so we always pay the power people first thing. Right after we tithe and pay on our house.

Now, if people don’t have Jesus then they must not have power. So they ain’t got light either. Can’t figure how they could deal with that.

Bzzz. Bzzz.

Pastor Plum, funny name, ain’t it? Well, he told us about Jesus being light and all that but he talked about people being drawn to false lights, too. I reckon that’s like the bug zapper out there. Those bugs think they are gonna get some heat or something, but they end up fried. I sure have met some people who think they found the way to know God or eternal life or whatever is they call it, but I tell you what, they is just going to get fried in the end.

Pling, pling. Creak. Creak.


When I think about that porch light over there I think about Jesus. I ain’t crazy, but it just makes me think about him being the right light. I can always see where I’m going when that light is on. I don’t even have to fumble in the dark for my keys.

I think I’d like to be like that. My neighbors all tell me that I’m strange, but maybe that’s a good thing. I bet they wouldn’t like it if I called them bugs. They sure are looking for light, though. Maybe I should let God put a stronger bulb in me.

Creak Creak. Pling. Pling.

Sure is hot out here.


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Seema Bagai 07/16/09
I enjoyed the MC's voice in this piece.
Laury Hubrich 07/22/09
I love this. Very good job writing your analogy. I love the quirkiness of your MC. Very, very good:)
Mariane Holbrook07/22/09
I love the line about the bugs expecting to get some light but end up getting fried by a false light. Some good stuff in here! But I would expect no less from you, my Southern porch friend!
Sharon Kane07/22/09
I like the understated style of this. My favourite line is "I bet they wouldn't like it if I called them bugs". Just about sums up how Christians are called to take all kinds of flack and not retaliate! I like your descriptions of how hot can be really too much too. Been there!
Sara Harricharan 07/22/09
Loved the creative way you formated this. It was very well done. The buzz and the creak, etc. made this come alive. Nicely done.
Jan Ackerson 03/20/10
Rachel, I'm going to feature this extremely creative story on the Front Page Showcase for the week of April 26. Look for it on the FaithWriters home page--and congratulations!
Ruth Stromquist04/28/10
This is really excellent! Love the way you used the symbolism to illustrate strong Spiritual concepts. And I too, loved the narrator's voice. A very engaging story with a good message.


   
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